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Post by eclispe on May 8, 2008 23:49:48 GMT -5
One a knight brave and true, The other a wicked lord, They dueled beyond the river blue, And near the dragon hoard.
He carried but a simple sword, To strike for honer and right, He wield a evil mace, And so began the fight.
Alas the night was long, And once his sword did fail, With the fates singing their cold song, Evil near prevailed
I still have a few more verses to add. Oh and can anyone help me on the part "With the fates singing their cold song," It just doesn't sound right.
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Post by Kaiza on May 23, 2008 1:06:05 GMT -5
Guys, can you all stop with the double posting? But it's good Eclipse!
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Post by eclispe on May 23, 2008 10:09:20 GMT -5
Yeah uh sorry about that.
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