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Post by eclispe on Apr 30, 2008 23:32:21 GMT -5
I wish that I could be a bird, So many sights to see, So many secrets to be heard, A world waiting for me,
Flying high above the clouds, My tiny voice begins to ring, As above the wind clear and loud, Praises to our world I sing,
Alas I am not a bird, So many sights I will not see, So many secrets left unheard, I guess I will have to just be me.
I'm something of a poet. The only ones who have seen my work are friends and family so I wanted to see what you think!
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Post by Kaiza on May 1, 2008 12:22:46 GMT -5
Wow, that's really good, Eclipse! I can't write poems to save my life. xDDD
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Post by song [ B I R D ] on May 1, 2008 16:47:58 GMT -5
That's really awesome! You've got talent, Eclipse!
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Post by eclispe on May 6, 2008 10:43:39 GMT -5
Thank you guys.
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Post by Dark Star on May 7, 2008 19:10:32 GMT -5
no seriously! that's like awesome! It sounds familar though, to me
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